Work Sample : Jerry

Activity : Narrative

    Narrative - Jerry : Grade Commentary

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Jerry has demonstrated sound knowledge and understanding of the structure and features of a narrative. An interesting storyline with simple plot development has been used but the text lacks a title and a strong conclusion. The characters have been effectively introduced but additional detail on how the characters feel and respond to situations would enhance the narrative. Paragraphs have been used effectively but there is little variation in sentence structure and minimal use of descriptive language. The punctuation is adequate and most simple words have been correctly spelt. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade C standard midway through Stage 3.

Grade C

The student has a sound knowledge and understanding of the main areas of content and has achieved an adequate level of competence in the processes and skills.

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Foundation Statement strands

The following strands are covered in this activity:

  • Writing
    Students write well-structured and well-presented literary and factual texts for a wide range of purposes and audiences, dealing with complex topics, ideas, issues and language features. They write well-structured sentences, effectively using a variety of grammatical features. Students spell most common words accurately, and use a variety of strategies to spell less common words. They use a fluent and legible style to write and employ computer technology to present written texts effectively in a variety of ways for different purposes and audiences. Students evaluate the effectiveness of their writing by focusing on grammatical features and the conventions of writing.
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