Work Sample : Jessie

Activity : Exposition on an artwork

    Exposition on an artwork - Jessie : Grade Commentary

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Jessie has demonstrated an extensive knowledge and understanding of the content and a very high level of competence in using the text type. Information has been communicated in an articulate, confident and creative manner using appropriate exposition format. Sophisticated language has been used to effectively convey and justify the ideas expressed. The sentences are descriptive and well structured despite some errors in grammar and punctuation. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade A standard at the end of Stage 3.

Grade A

The student has an extensive knowledge and understanding of the content and can readily apply this knowledge. In addition, the student has achieved a very high level of competence in the processes and skills and can apply these skills to new situations.

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Foundation Statement strands

The following strands are covered in this activity:

  • Writing
    Students write well-structured and well-presented literary and factual texts for a wide range of purposes and audiences, dealing with complex topics, ideas, issues and language features. They write well-structured sentences, effectively using a variety of grammatical features. Students spell most common words accurately, and use a variety of strategies to spell less common words. They use a fluent and legible style to write and employ computer technology to present written texts effectively in a variety of ways for different purposes and audiences. Students evaluate the effectiveness of their writing by focusing on grammatical features and the conventions of writing.
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