Writing - Promotional Flyer - Shane : Grade Commentary
Shane has demonstrated a very high level of competence in communicating in written form. Detailed and appropriate descriptions of each item have been provided. Creative ideas have been fluently and engagingly communicated, drawing on a wide range of vocabulary and linguistic structures. There are minor errors such as the use of
taille instead of
pointure for shoes, but these do not impede communication. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade A standard.
Grade A
The student has an extensive knowledge and understanding of the content and can readily apply this knowledge. In addition, the student has achieved a very high level of competence in the processes and skills and can apply these skills to new situations.
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