Life writing - Jude : Grade Commentary
Jude has demonstrated an adequate level of competence in composing and evaluating a personal reflection. A personal engagement with the content and the form are evident. The reflection on the process of writing is well made but would benefit from the inclusion of supporting evidence. The importance of vocabulary and the need for structure have been identified, indicating a developing understanding of the needs of the audience. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade C standard midway through Stage 4.
Grade C
The student has a sound knowledge and understanding of the main areas of content and has achieved an adequate level of competence in the processes and skills.
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