Life writing - Dale : Grade Commentary
Dale has demonstrated an adequate level of competence in composing and evaluating a personal reflection. Reasons are provided for the focus of the piece, but there is lack of discussion about the language choices and their intended effect on the audience. Mention is made of purpose of the piece but it is not clearly articulated. It would benefit from greater depth of analysis. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade C standard midway through Stage 4.
Grade C
The student has a sound knowledge and understanding of the main areas of content and has achieved an adequate level of competence in the processes and skills.
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