Life writing - Haley : Grade Commentary
Haley has demonstrated a high level of competence in composing and evaluating a personal reflection. A well-sustained reflection showing a strong understanding of the use of narrative voice and word choice to create a particular effect has been provided. Haley has presented a clear point of view and writes with discernment about limitations. There is a strong awareness of the perspective of the persona and how specific techniques affect the audience response to the persona but some ideas could be expressed more clearly. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade B standard at the end of Stage 4.
Grade B
The student has a thorough knowledge and understanding of the content and a high level of competence in the processes and skills. In addition, the student is able to apply this knowledge and these skills to most situations.
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