Digital worlds – English for the web: Film review - Shane (60-69)
Commentary
This response demonstrates a basic understanding of the conventions of a review. Although there is some attempt to present a point of view about the film, the discussion of ideas remains undeveloped. The response would be strengthened by exploring aspects of the film beyond the plot and basic references to special effects. This work sample demonstrates the characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing within the 60–69 mark range.
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