Digital worlds – English for the web: Film review - Lindsey (70-79)
Commentary
This response presents a developing discussion of the features of a film and attempts to interpret the use of these. There is a developing ability to communicate a personal opinion and this is supported by well-chosen elements of the film. While there is evidence of increasing ability to control the structure and organisation of ideas, there is some inconsistency in the control of language. This work sample demonstrates the characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing within the 70–79 mark range.
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