Digital worlds – English for the web: Feature article - Dani (70-79)
Commentary
This response demonstrates developing knowledge and understanding of how language techniques are used in a feature article. There is evidence of some use of persuasive techniques, including high modality words, to convey a point of view about cyber bullying. This shows a developing understanding of the use of vocabulary and style appropriate to a feature article. There is evidence of planning and research and this is demonstrated through the organisation of the information and reference to statistics. However, the structure and expression of this information and the use of key features such as quotations require further development of skills. This work sample demonstrates the characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing within the mark range of 70–79.
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