Work Sample : Sascha

Activity : Discussion

    Discussion - Sascha : Grade Commentary

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Sascha has demonstrated basic knowledge and understanding of the content and text type. A limited level of competence in structuring an argument and providing supporting examples is evident. Some progress from the mindmap to the draft and final copy has been shown, and a conclusion has been presented but there is no justification of viewpoints. Basic desktop publishing skills have been demonstrated but the text could be improved with the use of more complex sentences and the substantiation of ideas. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade D standard midway through Stage 3.

Grade D

The student has a basic knowledge and understanding of the content and has achieved a limited level of competence in the processes and skills.

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Foundation Statement strands

The following strands are covered in this activity:

  • Writing
    Students write well-structured and well-presented literary and factual texts for a wide range of purposes and audiences, dealing with complex topics, ideas, issues and language features. They write well-structured sentences, effectively using a variety of grammatical features. Students spell most common words accurately, and use a variety of strategies to spell less common words. They use a fluent and legible style to write and employ computer technology to present written texts effectively in a variety of ways for different purposes and audiences. Students evaluate the effectiveness of their writing by focusing on grammatical features and the conventions of writing.
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