Work Sample : Jamie

Activity : Information report on an animal

    Information report on an animal - Jamie : Grade Commentary

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Jamie has demonstrated a basic understanding of the information report text type. Some research has been undertaken and paragraphs have been used to structure the text but there are some problems with the layout. With teacher guidance, Jamie has constructed and used simple sentences that lack detail. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade D standard at the end of Stage 2.

Grade D

The student has a basic knowledge and understanding of the content and has achieved a limited level of competence in the processes and skills.

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Foundation Statement strands

The following strands are covered in this activity:

  • Writing
    Students write well-structured literary and factual texts in terms of topic, purpose, audience and language by drafting, revising and proofreading. They use accurate sentence structure, grammatical features and punctuation conventions to produce various texts and spell familiar and unfamiliar words using knowledge of letter-sound correspondence, common letter patterns and a range of other strategies. Students use joined letters when writing in NSW Foundation Style and develop basic desktop publishing skills. Students explain how they structure their writing to achieve intended purposes.
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