Persuasive writing to raise public awareness - Lesley : Grade Commentary
Lesley has demonstrated an adequate understanding of composing a persuasive text, a radio script, to raise public awareness. Radio interview conventions have been followed using appropriate informal language for the context and audience, but a clearer differentiation between interviewer and student is needed. A clear sense of purpose is demonstrated by the use of statistics, anecdotes and some persuasive techniques. Sufficient information is provided, but it would benefit from greater depth and detail. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade C standard midway through Stage 5.
Grade C
The student has a sound knowledge and understanding of the main areas of content and has achieved an adequate level of competence in the processes and skills.
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