Movie Review and User Comment - Ariel : Grade Commentary
Ariel has produced an effective movie review with user comment section, demonstrating a thorough understanding of both the review text type and the film. The review is well-structured and informative, but needs to provide more analysis of film techniques. Although the level of language is appropriate, and at times is quite sophisticated in language choice, better editing is needed. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade B standard at the end of Stage 5.
Grade B
The student has a thorough knowledge and understanding of the content and a high level of competence in the processes and skills. In addition, the student is able to apply this knowledge and these skills to most situations.
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