Persuasive writing to raise public awareness - Jody : Grade Commentary
Jody has demonstrated a very high level of competence in composing a persuasive text, a letter, to raise public awareness. The letter is well written and fluent showing a clear sense of confidence and personal style with a perceptive and insightful understanding of audience expectations. A range of persuasive techniques have been used effectively, such as emotive language and an suitable personal tone, to raise awareness of the issues. The argument is well outlined and sustained and there is evidence of critical interpretation of information as appropriate specific examples have been provided as supporting evidence. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade A standard midway through Stage 5.
Grade A
The student has an extensive knowledge and understanding of the content and can readily apply this knowledge. In addition, the student has achieved a very high level of competence in the processes and skills and can apply these skills to new situations.
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