Other Work Samples for:
Lou has demonstrated sound knowledge and understanding of the migrant experience through the description of events and explanation of reasons for migration. The first person account has been sustained and there is sound description of some experiences in Australia, although these tend to be generalisations. There are some errors with dates and the use of terms, and the response would benefit from more detail on the migrant's experiences on the ship and in Australia. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade C standard.