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Jamie has demonstrated a sound knowledge and understanding of the place of the Nile River in Egyptian society. The use of the descriptive report scaffold is sound with an effective use of topic sentences. There is an adequate level of competence in the communication of information but some anachronisms have been included and there is inconsistency in the detail provided on aspects of life along the Nile. The use of historical terms is adequate. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade C standard.