Leaders of the Crusades: Saladin/Richard I (the Lionheart) - Indra : Grade Commentary
Indra has demonstrated sound knowledge and understanding of the siege of Jerusalem and the city’s fall. Relevant information has been selected and quotations have been used effectively, but the sources have not been cited. Indra has provided substantial historical information in relation to the weapons and tactics used at the time but has not sustained an effective explanation of the impact of Saladin’s actions on the Crusades. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade C standard.
Grade C
The student has a sound knowledge and understanding of the main areas of content and has achieved an adequate level of competence in the processes and skills.
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