Writing - Jordan : Grade Commentary
Jordan has demonstrated an adequate level of competence in creating a survey to design a camp menu. Language appropriate to the audience and context has been used but stronger cultural understanding could be demonstrated by having lunch as the main meal of the day. There are some errors in the linguistic structures but a variety of structures have been used. Verbs have been manipulated reasonably well despite some recurring errors. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade C standard.
Grade C
The student has a sound knowledge and understanding of the main areas of content and has achieved an adequate level of competence in the processes and skills.
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