My Story, Your Story - Kelsey : Grade Commentary
Kelsey has demonstrated an adequate level of competence in composing an imaginative narrative with a sense of time and place on the contribution of Adam Goodes to Australian society. There is evidence of sound research and personal engagement. There are few errors in spelling and punctuation, and the sentence construction is varied. Descriptive and emotive language have been used effectively to create character, mood and tone, although a little more light and shade in the description would assist the pacing of the text. At times the audience and purpose are lost and the text tends towards recount. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade C standard at the end of Stage 4.
Grade C
The student has a sound knowledge and understanding of the main areas of content and has achieved an adequate level of competence in the processes and skills.
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