Persuasive letter - Shane : Grade Commentary
Shane has demonstrated a thorough knowledge and understanding of the conventions of writing a persuasive letter and has produced a coherent response. The use of persuasive techniques, language choices and sentence construction are appropriate for audience, purpose and form. Information about Australia has been carefully selected and thematically presented, providing a clear point of view with effective supporting evidence. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade B at the end of Stage 4.
Grade B
The student has a thorough knowledge and understanding of the content and a high level of competence in the processes and skills. In addition, the student is able to apply this knowledge and these skills to most situations.
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