Work Sample : Cam

Activity : Procedure

    Procedure - Cam : Grade Commentary

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Cam has demonstrated thorough knowledge and understanding of the structure and features of a procedural text. Lists of materials, goals and a conclusion have been included. The sequencing is logical and effective, with action verbs and commands used at the beginning of each sentence. Cam has used adverbial phrases to add meaning to the text. Correct punctuation and accurate spelling are evident. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade B standard at the end of Stage 1.

Grade B

The student has a thorough knowledge and understanding of the content and a high level of competence in the processes and skills. In addition, the student is able to apply this knowledge and these skills to most situations.

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Foundation Statement strands

The following strands are covered in this activity:

  • Writing
    Students write simple literary and factual texts on familiar topics for known readers by planning and reviewing their writing. They write using basic grammatical features and conventions of punctuation, showing awareness of different purposes, audiences and subject matter. Students spell using knowledge of sight words, letter-sound correspondence and other strategies. They write using letters of consistent size and slope in NSW Foundation Style and use computer technology to produce texts, recognising simple conventions, language and functions.
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