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Work Sample : Kim

Activity : Letters to the Editor - Food

    Letters to the Editor - Food - Kim : Grade Commentary

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Kim has demonstrated thorough knowledge and understanding of the requirements of a letter to the editor. In each letter, an attempt has been made to adopt an appropriate tone and present a point of view with supporting examples. The letters are well structured but there is some repetition and flawed expression. A stronger understanding of the key issues, particularly in the second letter, would enhance this response. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade B standard at the end of Stage 5.

Grade B

The student has a thorough knowledge and understanding of the content and a high level of competence in the processes and skills. In addition, the student is able to apply this knowledge and these skills to most situations.

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