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Work Sample : Bailey

Activity : Changing Australian Communities: Research Report

    Changing Australian Communities: Research Report - Bailey : Grade Commentary

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Bailey has demonstrated thorough knowledge and understanding of Australian environments and communities. The research is good but has not been well organised under the appropriate headings. In the extended response Bailey has explained different perspectives regarding the gay and lesbian community, identifying three factors that contribute to the community's sense of identity but there are some references that have not been included such as the political influence of the Christian Democrats. The report could be strengthened by more effective coverage of factors bringing change to the community. Some analysis has been undertaken and complex geographical information, including the changes taking place in society, has been adequately communicated but the map does not seem to have a purpose. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade B standard.

Grade B

The student has a thorough knowledge and understanding of the content and a high level of competence in the processes and skills. In addition, the student is able to apply this knowledge and these skills to most situations.

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