Work Sample : Pat

Activity : Recount

    Recount - Pat : Commentary

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Pat has demonstrated an adequate awareness of the features of a recount. Ideas have been appropriately sequenced and past tense has been consistently used. Attempts have been made to use conjunctions to add information, and emotive language has been used to convey feelings. A picture has been used to support the ideas in the recount. There is good directionality and spacing between words. Letter formation is generally correct but there is some confusion in the use of the letters ‘b’ and ‘d’. A variety of strategies have been used to spell words, and copied text has been included. To develop further, Pat needs to elaborate on the event and work on letter formation and the correct use of punctuation, particularly full stops. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at the expected standard at the end of Kindergarten.

Foundation Statement strands

The following strands are covered in this activity:

  • Writing
    Students write with an increasing awareness of the nature, purpose and conventions of written language. They produce simple texts that demonstrate an awareness of the basic grammar and punctuation needed. Students know and use letters and sounds of the alphabet to attempt to spell known words and use most lower and upper case letters appropriately to construct sentences. Students explore the use of computer technology to construct texts.
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