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Work Sample : Jules

Activity : Life writing

    Life writing - Jules : Grade Commentary

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Jules has demonstrated an adequate level of competence in composing and evaluating a personal reflection. There is a sense of audience and purpose, and the response is generally fluent. The reflection adequately covers the ideas in the text but conventions such as spelling, sentence structure and register have not been addressed as effectively as possible. A sound awareness of literary devices and their general effect has been demonstrated and supported with some examples from the text. The reflection could be improved by greater depth of analysis and a clear indication of future directions for writing. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade C standard at the end of Stage 4.

Grade C

The student has a sound knowledge and understanding of the main areas of content and has achieved an adequate level of competence in the processes and skills.

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